| Order | Title | Comment | Date | Rating | | Reads | Comments |
01 | |  this one has niceio magical, mystical feel to it. liked it! | 2008-12-04 13:54:06 | 9 |  | 153 | 7 |
02 | |  Well written and spooky, a poem from limbo, perhaps? B. | 2008-12-04 13:44:16 | 9 |  | 8 | 1 |
03 | |  good one. loved it! | 2008-12-04 13:31:00 | 8 |  | 36 | 1 |
04 | |  Carnos, I believe in dreams... many things have happened to me over years pertaining to a 'similar sort of dream~insight'. I believe you, thanks for sharing your poem . aNdyE ... induce | 2008-12-04 12:50:06 | 8 |  | 49 | 3 |
05 | |  wow, how the hell did this get slept on by everyone? great write. i'm afraid it's 04.06am right now so i am finding it a little difficult to string together a good comment... all i can say is that i look forward to going through your other works on GP | 2008-12-04 12:38:33 | 8 |  | 22 | 1 |
06 | |  Effectively magical haiku, way to go!
Noizy1 | 2008-12-04 12:02:59 | 9 |  | 39 | 5 |
07 | |  maryanns, you have described a storm excellently ~ i can hear that one, we have been getting them daily here in Aussie Land, great words and visuals ~ your words do hit a spot right now, i do enjoy them . induce | 2008-12-04 12:02:41 | 9 |  | 23 | 2 |
08 | |  Hi..I just love this imagry, very creative and
touching..Realrhoda | 2008-12-04 11:41:57 | 9 |  | 47 | 4 |
09 | |  I got a chuckle out of this. I really enjoyed this piece. Made me smile today. :D It's a quite nice poem you've written. | 2008-12-04 11:27:27 | 9 |  | 323 | 16 |
10 | |  Enjoyed the shortness. :) Seems perfect for it being short. Just right. | 2008-12-04 11:22:14 | 7 |  | 48 | 6 |
11 | |  Dang... *jawdrop* Impressive. I read through and I could feel everything. I enjoyed your use of words as well. Different from the everyday use. :)
And I got to say, I LOVE the last two lines. Those are especially my favorite lines out of the whole poem. Ties it all together perfectly. | 2008-12-04 11:15:48 | 9 |  | 52 | 3 |
12 | |  beautiful | 2008-12-04 11:10:13 | 8 |  | 21 | 1 |
13 | |  This was very amusing to read. | 2008-12-04 10:20:33 | 8 |  | 102 | 7 |
14 | |  It's always good to forgive but I know it's also hard to forget. Good write, nicely expressed. | 2008-12-04 10:19:12 | 9 |  | 83 | 3 |
15 | |  There are lots of people I know who wear the same mask you described LC very nicely written and well expressed. | 2008-12-04 10:08:07 | 9 |  | 9 | 1 |
16 | |  i like this poem...very cute | 2008-12-04 08:45:25 | 9 |  | 202 | 3 |
17 | |  I agree with varivas. this is the best poem so far. | 2008-12-04 08:11:44 | 10 |  | 84 | 4 |
18 | |  you sure? LOL will take some work on your part, me think... cheers, :) | 2008-12-04 04:05:16 | 9 |  | 29 | 1 |
19 | |  OOOO That's really cute!! | 2008-12-04 03:07:27 | 7 |  | 63 | 1 |
20 | |  kev, i am in love with this ku!! | 2008-12-04 02:04:07 | 9 |  | 17 | 1 |
21 | |  I love the last verse especially :) | 2008-12-04 01:21:07 | 7 |  | 204 | 2 |
22 | |  Oh Firefly, how did this beautiful patriotic poem get missed? I have not seen the colors explained in ages, and the poem reads like a song. Cheers, Mary Ann | 2008-12-04 00:48:23 | 9 |  | 91 | 1 |
23 | |  right on s.s.a..q | 2008-12-03 23:11:28 | 9 |  | 79 | 2 |
24 | |  a fine tribute to the giver of golden life and warmth:) q | 2008-12-03 23:07:20 | 9 |  | 39 | 5 |
25 | |  great job Rick. it flowed beautifully and the subject was a good one.. children are the eyes of our soul.. Melly | 2008-12-03 23:00:45 | 9 |  | 75 | 5 |
26 | |  Wow? what can one say for the passion which burns within these words? Just the expressive nature of it, brings my own first senses of unity of my soul with that one which meant so much to my heart. Great use of thought and discription of your own feelings of doubt. Thanks I needed that optimistic view point. | 2008-12-03 22:55:12 | 8 |  | 680 | 1 |
27 | |  what a well rounded, conclusive gem to ponder..ambition and understanding at their finest..makes the world seem, geographical beautiful and do-able:) kev | 2008-12-03 22:51:50 | 10 |  | 35 | 2 |
28 | |  A sweet poem, Angel, descriptions and flow are so nicely done. Love the end. Best regards, Mary Ann | 2008-12-03 20:45:47 | 8 |  | 27 | 3 |
29 | |  Ah, Q, I think the last stanza holds the qnswers. So well written with lots of understanding. Kind regards, Mary Ann | 2008-12-03 20:39:53 | 9 |  | 21 | 2 |
30 | |  You're so understanding, Becky. I surely hope the friendship prospers. You have such a warm heart. Regards, Mary Ann | 2008-12-03 20:33:25 | 9 |  | 54 | 5 |
31 | |  It takes a lot of courage to release the familiar and seemingly secure, to embrace the new. But there is no real security in what is no longer meaningful. There is more security in the adventurous and exciting, for in movement there is life, and in change there is power.
I think you know what I mean . Hooray for you.. blessings Melly | 2008-12-03 19:49:41 | 10 |  | 21 | 2 |
32 | |  THIS WAS SHORT AND HAD SO MUCH MEANING TO IT . I LOVE IT | 2008-12-03 18:44:35 | 10 |  | 34 | 1 |
33 | |  WOW....I love this poem man. Great job. | 2008-12-03 17:28:49 | 10 |  | 22 | 1 |
34 | |  Thank you is want I want to say | 2008-12-03 16:32:24 | 8 |  | 38 | 3 |
35 | |  I love this poem. I was lilting along with you through your day and then the end, so sad, my heart fell. | 2008-12-03 16:15:38 | 9 |  | 154 | 7 |